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Showing posts with label 2020 writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2020 writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 3 March 2021

how to be a good brother or sister recount

 Intro talofa lava malo eleli and hi i am lorenzo this a recount about how to be a good brother or sister hope you enjoy.

:teamwork

Info  to be a good brother or sister you can help them with their chores and help them clean the bed of your entire room and help them do the dishes and you do that all in teamwork.


:encourage

Info other reasons why to be a good brother or sister. You can encourage them like if they're playing a rugby game you can cheer them up or if they're playing a video game and they're about to win you always encourage them.

:sharing

Info and other other reasons to be a good brother or sister.  If you have lollies and your brother or sister doesn't you can always share with them to make them happy and safe.


Con  you can do teamwork together by helping one another and you could be in a team with them and get some tries and help each other . and when you're in the same team you could always hype them up so you could get most of the tries and just make them happy and encouraged. And you always got to share the ball with them so it could all be fair and just have a good day so you dont fight so thats why we always share with or brothers and sisters and i hope enjoyed my hard work recount bye bye.


Friday, 16 October 2020

about my week

 this week we have been learning about art and the korero is art alive . and we learn about edvard munch and andy warhol . and andy warhol draw tamato soup four times. and edvard munch drawed the scearm.and this Wednesday we went to the gi pools for swimming lessons so we dont drown on the beach or the pools .and my group is Antzel,toni,Aaliah,nahea, and me. i was the best swimmer on earth (jokes i cant even swim)and that is all about my week bye bye.

Wednesday, 29 July 2020

three goals for litrecy

LORENZO
1: doing narrative writings  


2:and i like doing littrecy with my friends and teacher



3:and i like finishing my writing about myths and legends

task description: hi and i am going to tell about my goals. my first one is doing narrtive writing i like doing fake and some real stories for fun and i always add my friends when there are people. my 2nd one is doing litrecy with my friends and teacher because i am so bad at writing so i get help from my friends and i post it. my 3rd writing about myths and legends and that is my team is doing for this term. and this is why i wanna get better and writing.
 

Wednesday, 1 July 2020

Tuesday, 17 March 2020

create it narrative

six sentanece story

Six-sentence story

Sentence 1: Begins with ‘Once upon a time’ and introduces the main character
Sentence 2: Describes where the character lived
Sentence 3: Describes where the character’s special talent
Sentence 4: Describes the character’s problem
Sentence 5: Tells why the character felt that way
Sentence 6: Tells how the character solved the problem


1. Once upon a time  there was a boy named siakupega




2. He lived in a kingdom with his two sisters and his mom and dad.

3.his talent was he can swallow swords and spit fire out.



4.there was a problem at a restaurant where there were pigs under the table every time they got the check then when they gave money to the manajer it stuck on the pigs back.

5.so they went to the place and he felt unconfonttheble  he got shivers down his spine.



6.so he looked under the table then he found a vent he went in the ent then he found a little door then he found a room then he saw a man mel he had gold shoes diamond grills and he had a coat on and and the man told him to get out he said hi name was mel so they had a fight sia kupenga got his sword and chucked it in his mouth and spit out fire then he burden of his coat and he had pigs under his coat it wasn't a person then he took on pig and cooked it and te it the end.




Monday, 9 March 2020

fun choices

choose it narrative

Once upon a time there was a little king then found a place in the forest . Then he went to his dad the king, he was doing his job slaving them the son said why are they bleeding then the dad said it is called slaving them . the son looked at the people  that were in there but one of them was not in pain then the son said to stop it then the dad said why i want to see that man the one on the right said the dad. Then the sun grabbed the key then went in then went to the man not in pain then the sun asked what his name was then he said it's SAM then the  said his name was john . 30 years the king died by a sword in war then john was king now but he did not slave anyone he was telling them to build them a houses then SAM was a soldier he worked for john then they were looking after the town then they went to the lion then they ask the lion a question then the lion started to attack them they ask the lion if it was OK then they heard a laugh then SAM was angry then john remembered that laugh then john told her to come out then they had a fight then the king gave her a scar on her face then she said i will be back then the lion had no heart then then john and SAM was looking for the lions heart then they found it then they saw the queen then SAM shine the heart in front of her face then she did nothing then they but it closer in front of her face then she was a pretty queen then they but the heart back in the lion's heart the end.