WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)
So thanos gets angry cause they destroyed his planet and he wants payback so steve
fox and jin and devil jin and lucky Chloe and king Steve is a boxer and jin he is sad and stuff
and lucky Chloe she is so happy but she is smart and king he has a head that's a tiger and he
has a human and he is strong
fox and jin and devil jin and lucky Chloe and king Steve is a boxer and jin he is sad and stuff
and lucky Chloe she is so happy but she is smart and king he has a head that's a tiger and he
has a human and he is strong
So they were fighting then they killed him.
Hello Lorenzo I like your piece of writing about thanos ,steve fox ,jin,devil,lucky, chole and king.I love how this story is very interesting and dramatic.Hope to read more of your story's. But I think that instead of saying and all the time you can use commas.
ReplyDeleteWell done
kind regards
Marie