recount 2

Last week on friday i went to jump and i went with my mum and dad and my sister and brother we went there for fun for planing then we went paraki and there was a big big slide and a big pool too we were swimming around i was deep but i could still touch the bottom then when i went to the slide i went down then i was drowning . the beginning was the scary bit because i was drowning,





Then we went to rainbow's end we went on the big rides first because my brother was cry for the log but my sister wanted to go gold rush but we went log because he cried louder than i thought than i had to





Go with my siblings then they got scared because .

Narrative writing plan

This is my narrative writing plan.

matariki day

Last week on friday it was matariki day i was on crafting it was fun
We made stars it was cool my teacher was mrs moran she was the best
And we had year ones and year 7s they helped us then after it was
Lunch time i had cookie time and a chicken stick . then i went to play handball with my friend teejay and inga and rosey.that was the funny
Thing then the bell rang. Then we were making something else.
We were drawing a star then we cut the star then we put the
Star on a paper then we coloured around the star the we pick the star up
The the paper looks like a star and we had actives to do we had
Cross word or finish the sentences then the bell rang for lunch
We had lots of time to play.we were just playing handball again
Then we lost the ball.then after lunch we went to get or bags we
Went to assembly for the end of the day after assembly we went home.

the buckt

Today we had to show what we can write when we have 40 minutes to write without talking to others we were able to work quietly to complete the task.

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Once apon a time there was a cow a chicken and rat and a bee They whated. to go to the beach but they did not were to go. But the cow found a map that leads you to a beach then there Hunters that were hunting for the cow then the cow was running away form them the he found some. Where to hide he hided And the hunters went away . the the cow was save the he found The chicken and the rat then. They went to the beehive the cow said. Moow then. The bee got scared he . the bee was still sleeping The the bee went out then the cow told bee everything then They follow the map they went for adventures they vrese a angry bear. The bear was kind the bear was scared because there were Hunters looking for him to then the cow told the bear to follow him



So there were all most there then the bear smell fresh water then the cow followed then they found the beach then they jumped in the water they a fun time the end.